Tieran Zabini [done]

[Tieran Zabini]

Tieran
Dimitri
Zabini

'cause this is the only prayer i know

BASICS[/center]

NICKNAMES

DATE OF BIRTH

AGE

YEAR

GENDER

RELIGION

SEXUAL ORIENTATION

SPECIAL ABILITY, BREED

BLOOD STATUS

OCCUPATION

WAND

PET

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PERSONALITY[/center]

FIRST IMPRESSION

SELF IMAGE

GOOD TRAITS

BAD TRAITS

LIKES

DISLIKES

SECRETS

HABITS

AMBITIONS

FEARS

PATRONUS, WHY

BOGGART

AMORTENTIA

don't lose my picture ;; you'll need it again next time i know
APPEARANCE

“Tieran has the kind of face you only find on people of good breding.” So said Tieran's mother Aara Zabini one night at one of her famous dinner parties. Tieran had bowed his head, embarrassed. But no matter how he tried to hide it, there was no way around the fact. Tieran was beautiful.
Tieran's face did come from good breding, no doubt of that. He has Caribbean eyes, a mix of blue, green, brown and gold. They're spread a little farther apart then he would like and slant down at the corners. But few people get to see his eyes. Tieran often gazes down at the ground. When he does look you in the eyes you can only see a glimpse of the unique eyes underneath. Mahogany hair hangs down all around his face- so long it brushes his collar. A strong nose gives way to a wide, upside down mouth. The top lip is fuller then the bottom. This however only adds to his beauty.
Standing 6 foot 1, Tieran towers over others in his class. This has made it a little hard to get a date. Not that Tieran is a very big dater. He is very melancholy; rarely smiling. But when he does prepare to lose your heart. Those spectacular eyes of his light up. Tieran's upside down mouth spreads from ear to ear- showing two rows of straight white teeth. He'll touch you- if only for a few seconds.
Skinny but not overly skinny, Tieran is what you'd call healthy. He runs- rain or shine. It lets him think. He mostly runs alone so don't ask him to run in front of anyone. Tieran is very shy and will stumble all over himself while running.

PLAY BY

EYE COLOR

HAIR COLOR, STYLE

SKIN COLOR

WEIGHT, HEIGHT, BUILD

CLOTHING STYLE

VOICE, LANGUAGE, ACCENT

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DISTINGUISHING FEATURES

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we stood like statues at the gate

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FAMILY[/center]

MOTHER

FATHER

SIBLINGS

GRANDPARENTS

AUNTS AND UNCLES

COUSINS

FAMILY FRIENDS

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HISTORY[/center]

PERSONS OF IMPORTANCE

NATIONALITY

HOMETOWN

CURRENT RESIDENCE

WEALTH STATUS

OVERALL HISTORY

this stage of oblivion I find comfortable

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SCHOOL LIFE[/center]

SOCIAL STATUS

ALLIANCE

COURSES AND GRADES

FAVORITE CLASS, WHY?

LEAST FAVORITE CLASS, WHY?

O.W.L AND N.E.W.T SCORES

THOUGHTS ON GRADES

the moment you said goodbye
YOU

NAME

TIMEZONE

OTHER CHARACTERS

HOW YOU FOUND US

WHAT YOU LIKE ABOUT US

WHAT YOU DON'T LIKE ABOUT US

MISCELLANEOUS

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[Kamilla Lestrange]

[/b] well written out and I like how his awkward, shy, and timid behavior shines through into his behavior. He walks with his head downcast and his gorgeous eyes are covered up. He's got a very unique personality but I like it. (: The only thing I would recommend doing would be to extend on his traits - why he is the way he is. Talk about Ali more! And NEWT and OWL scores are like finals for wizards and witches - just talk about the classes he took fifth year and the OWL scores he got for that. NEWT's are for seventh year. Also, Blaise Zabini was black so make sure to mention that Aara. And if you can, maybe change Markus to another small pure blood family? That'll give Tieran instant plotting and make MM accurate. (:

AND! I'd love to hear your input about the site. How are the rules restraining, how is the structure unique?

Great job lovely!
Normally, the admins [aka me. (:] sort the characters into houses but Tieran does belong in Slytherin so everything works out just fine!
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[Tieran Zabini]

Thanks so much Kami (can I call you that?)! I'll be sure to make all the changes you require. I actually based Tieran on a character from a book I'm writing. He's like my baby really, I'm so attached to him. lol

Okay, so I changed Aara's maiden name to Baddock, if that's alright. I also put some more facts into Tieran's history. Oh, and I want to keep Ali a mystery, something that you'll have to drag out of me. XD If that's alright with you?

[Kamilla Lestrange]

[Tieran Zabini]

I PM'd Marie. Was I supposed to or did you?

[Livinia Lange]

Marie hasn't been on lately. If I can get someone to tell me how I'll make him his Ministry file. I'm Miranda, by the way.

[Tieran Zabini]

Thanks that's very kind.

I'm Astrid.