Jakob Stevenson
Hufflepuff 
6th Year
"Oh, you can't help that," said the Cat "we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad."
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Post by Jakob Stevenson on Nov 2, 2008 14:42:47 GMT -5
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'cause this is the only prayer i know BASICS[/center]
NICKNAMES
DATE OF BIRTH
AGE
YEAR
GENDER
RELIGION
SEXUAL ORIENTATION
SPECIAL ABILITY, BREED
BLOOD STATUS
OCCUPATION
WAND
PET
a new, improved modern way to feel [/B][/COLOR] PERSONALITY[/center]
FIRST IMPRESSION
SELF IMAGE
GOOD TRAITS
BAD TRAITS
LIKES
DISLIKES
SECRETS
HABITS
AMBITIONS
FEARS
PATRONUS, WHY
BOGGART
AMORTENTIA
don't lose my picture ;; you'll need it again next time i know
APPEARANCE
PLAY BY
EYE COLOR
HAIR COLOR, STYLE
SKIN COLOR
WEIGHT, HEIGHT, BUILD
CLOTHING STYLE
VOICE, LANGUAGE, ACCENT
SCARS, TATTOOS, PIERCINGS
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES
we stood like statues at the gate [/B][/COLOR][/size] FAMILY[/center]
MOTHER
FATHER
SIBLINGS
GRANDPARENTS
AUNTS AND UNCLES
COUSINS
FAMILY ENEMIES
an ending no one's ever heard HISTORY[/center]
PERSONS OF IMPORTANCE
NATIONALITY
HOMETOWN
CURRENT RESIDENCE
WEALTH STATUS
OVERALL HISTORY
this stage of oblivion I find comfortable [/COLOR][/B] SCHOOL LIFE[/center]
SOCIAL STATUS
ALLIANCE
COURSES AND GRADES
FAVORITE CLASS, WHY?
LEAST FAVORITE CLASS, WHY?
O.W.L AND N.E.W.T SCORES
THOUGHTS ON GRADES
the moment you said goodbye
YOU
NAME
TIMEZONE
OTHER CHARACTERS
HOW YOU FOUND US
WHAT YOU LIKE ABOUT US
WHAT YOU DON'T LIKE ABOUT US
FINAL COMMENT
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Post by Lucy Weasley on Nov 3, 2008 1:16:36 GMT -5
Okay, a Mod is going to try her hand at this, because Ella love told her to. Soo let's see what we have here.
There's a few spelling and grammar mistakes and broken coding, but that won't keep you from getting accepted, just if you will fix that.
Patronus, I need you to explain why it's a sheep dog, how does this describe him, what characteristics does he share with his patronus?
If his eye color is blue from June to September, why is this so? And what color are they the rest of the time?
Can you throw in a few more distinguishing characteristics? What about the scares from his attempted suicide attempt?
Can you bring yourself to detail the history further, like how was it for him when his mother was sick?
I like his complexity, and how he's so often taken advantage of.
Once these few things are fixed, we'll look over it once again. I'll be able to think of which house to put poor Jakob in.
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Jakob Stevenson
Hufflepuff
6th Year
"Oh, you can't help that," said the Cat "we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad."
Posts: 189
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Post by Jakob Stevenson on Nov 3, 2008 9:00:38 GMT -5
OK tis done now... i think, but thats not really for me to decide. Thankies for the help
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Post by Lucy Weasley on Nov 3, 2008 23:47:50 GMT -5
Well done! I like him!
After much debating, going back and forth between houses, it's been decided that Jakob would do best in Hufflepuff.
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Jakob Stevenson
Hufflepuff
6th Year
"Oh, you can't help that," said the Cat "we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad."
Posts: 189
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Post by Jakob Stevenson on Jan 4, 2009 23:20:16 GMT -5
I dont know how to sticky
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